Everyday you experience a lot of different events, either joyful or sad events. No matter what happens, I believe everyone has tried to gain the happy life. But have you ever thought what happiness is and how to have happiness? Someone define happiness as having a lot of money and being physically acttractive. Others think happiness is purely freedom, good health and love. In general, happiness is something greatest and is felt differently by different people. So what is the secret of happiness? To me, a good health, a true friendship, a gentle mind are factors to make happiness.
The first factor to make us happy is good health. Some people might think that having lots of money means having anything. But this material seems to lose its meaning if we donot have a good health. In fact, we have big house, luxury car and a mountain of money for what if we always lie on bed and suffer the pain of weekness. Therefore, a good health is the most valuable gift of nature, with it we can get everything not with money. Having a good health means having poweful vitality, so we can gain all the thing we like. It is really happy if we are healthy and have the oppotunity to experience the colorful, large world outside. Happiness lies on the strength of a good health to make our dream turn true.
The second factor to make us happy is true friendship. A true friendship is one of the most precious treasures of life. It is the motivation to help us overcome obstacles. Indeed, whenever we are sad, a little care or a kind act from a friend can cheer us up. Is there anything happy as we always have a close friend to share our sorrows with? We are no longer afraid of being alone because our friend is always there and willing to lend emotional support. We can confide everything about life to our friend, and the most impotant thing is that ther is always a person to listen to and understand what we say. Human cannot live without friends. True friendship will help human become stronger. In another way, friendship is the key of happiness.
The final factor to make us happy is gentle mind. A gentle mind means we arenot jealous at what people do and have. It doesnot have any meaning if we just look at and criticize other people. The important thing of life is just about enjoying our own life. We will feel more comfortable with a peace in mind. Happiness is not implied as envy which makes people be selfish and jealous. It is indeed miserable for whoever mantains the thinking of envy. They cannot see how beautiful this world is with the mind full of narrow- mindedness. Living means purely enjoying life. If we care so much about little things in life how can we have happiness. Therefore, gentle mind is synonymous with happiness.
In summary, there is no doubt that happiness doesnot go with material or money. Good health, true friendship and gentle mind are three main factors to help us reach the happiness. We should live a healthy and relaxing life and build lots of good relationships. I believe when we wake up in the next morning, this will be a different and new day which is full of happiness.
Chủ Nhật, 28 tháng 3, 2010
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