Outline:
Introduction.
Hook: human qualities are something that cannot be taught.
Background: there are many different qualities and human characteristics that make up an individual.
Thesis statement: a good human needs three most following important qualities: honesty, sympathy and foregiveness.
Body:
Paragraph 1:
Topic sentence: The first important quality of a good human is honesty.
Supporting ideas:
-We usually tell lies because we are afraid of hurting our friends.
-A good human will tell truth and give comment to his friends'mistakes to help them correct.
-Although the truth maybe break up a relationship, the friendship cannot be built by lying and cheating
-Honesty is important.
Paragraph 2:
Topic sentence: the second important quality of a good human is sympathy.
Suppoting ideas:
-A good human will share the other's sorrow or disappointment.
-A good human will lend emotional support for whoever needs it.
-A good human will pay attention to the other's suffering, experience their pain and help them overcome difficulties.
-A good human is willing to open heart to understand other people's feeling.
Paragraph 3:
Topic sentence: the third and also the most important quality of a good human is forgiveness.
Supporting ideas:
-We have surely made mistake at least once in life.
-To become a good human, forgiveness is necessery to help the bond that connects two people be closer.
-This world will be better if we can fogive for each other's mistake.
Conclusion: Honesty, sympathy and forgiveness are three important qualities of a good human. Being truly good is easy to say but difficult to do and that why there arenot as many good human as we imagine. If we try to treat to other people with honesty, sympathy and forgiveness as we treat to ourselves, I believe the relationship between people and people will be better.
Writing:
Human qualities are something that cannot always be taught. There are many different qualities and human characteristics that make up an individual. In the numerous human qualities, it is difficult to distinguish who is a good human or a bad one. For me, a good human needs three most following important qualities: honesty, sympathy and foregiveness.
The first important quality of a good human is honesty. All of us have told lies at least once in life. That we tell lies does not mean we arenot good, but the fear of losing our friendship makes us to do so. We think that the truth maybe hurt our friends. However, a good human is willing to give comment to his friends' mistakes because it is one of the conditions to help friends find down and correct mistakes. Some people have said that being too honest can break up a relationship, but a good human always believes that a friendship cannot be built by lying. Honesty that derives from a sincere heart always creats nice relationship between two people and even the belief of each other.
The second important quality of a good human is sympathy. A good human is willing to share someone's feeling of sorrow or disappointment, and he is willing to lend emotional support. To establish a deeper connection with people who need help, a good human starts with paying attention to their suffering, with experiencing their pain. A sympathetic word or a kind act will help a person who has difficulty build courage to overcome that time.Selfish exicting in our mind makes the sympathy towards other people being entirely difficult. Therefore, to be sympathetis, a good human needs to open heart to understand other people's feeling.
The third and also the most important quality of a good human is forgiveness. We are human beings, so everyone cannot be perfect like God. During lifetime, we arenot sure that we only do the right things. We cannot somtimes stand our own mistakes, so being tolerant towards someone else's mistakes is totally an obstacle. To being truly good, forgiveness is necessary to make the bond between two people closer. Forgiveness is not only a chance for a person who has made mistakes to start again, but it is also a chance for us who accept these mistakes to study sympathy. This world will be better if we can forgive for each other's mistakes.
Honesty, sympathy and forgiveness are three most important qualities of a good human. Being truly good is easy to say but difficult to do, and that why there arenot as many good human as we imagine. If we try to treat to other people with honesty, sympathy and forgiveness as we treat to ourselves, I believe the relationship between people and people will be better.
